主题:【半原创】对考虑离开西西河的大人们说的话 -- 南方有嘉木
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不怎么样,虽然俺的英语多少年也没有什么进步。
Today’s market is characterised by intensive competition, choosing the right marketing strategy can affect the performance of ccthere.com. Effective segmentation and target marketing is required and the need to translate this into action. Target marketing and market segmentation, enables ccthere.com to focus their resources more precisely。Also deriving a greater competitive advantage and user satisfaction。
比如这一段
Effective segmentation and target marketing is required and the need to translate this into action.
“the need to translate this into action."和谁并列?
既无语法,更无修辞。
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🙂不敢,把你删的那段贴回来,本少爷给你改改错 马六甲 字0 2009-11-09 15:26:14
🙂本来对你这种ID我根本不屑一顾, 看你如此狂妄自大,那 思炎 字817 2009-11-09 15:57:11
🙂请问这是你删掉的那一段原话吗 马六甲 字0 2009-11-09 16:31:30
😅按俺NN年前考T的英语水平,那个英语实在是。。。
🙂如果你不放个“感叹号”我还不注意你的贴, 这不就是那个 思炎 字1270 2009-11-10 16:02:07
😅你这人不光是英语有问题,汉语阅读也有问题。 素里太守 字459 2009-11-10 19:44:38
🙂估计你没看明白我的回帖。 思炎 字1259 2009-11-11 06:29:49
🙂俺有读英语的自由,更有不读英语的自由!!! 素里太守 字68 2009-11-11 16:19:42