主题：【原创】Kroger Card -- coo

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more coherent

than the earlier one. According to Style written by Joseph Williams, the coherent description of a story would allow readers to catch it up easily.

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- - 🙂最近很闲么 redbud 字29 2011-10-04 12:11:46
    🙂long time ago coo 字65 2011-10-04 12:22:09
    🙂This version is much better redbud 字29 2011-10-04 16:18:29
    🙂more coherent

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