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                                                  • 家园 Let's save the best for last

                                                    Now I feel a little tedious playing this stupid game. It is such a drag for me to read some broken pieces of English like this, if you still call it English. Even if you edited your previous version, you still have tooooooo many errors in your newer version.

                                                    What pissed me off was the lie you lied. You tried to post some different version and denied your silly trick. I don’t see any honesty in your posts except some nasty dirty name calling.

                                                    Sorry for the offensive words here. You earned them.

                                                    Let me try to correct the errors in your post. Like I said earlier, I am not a “tall man”, but I am pretty sure what you wrote here was just a bunch of junk. It is hard to believe that such piece comes from someone who is studying/living in the mother country of this language. You really need a huge gut to post this in public.

                                                    Here under is my corrections. I hope you still have an appetite to read them. Sure I will make mistakes in my post, and “tall men or tall women”, you are welcome to point them out.

                                                    BTW, I don’t give a shit on your target marketing strategy. They are just tasteless rhetoric for me.

                                                    么。。。这是我当时要说的话:

                                                    Today’s market is characterised by intensive competition, choosing the right marketing strategy can affect the performance of ccthere.com. Effective segmentation and target marketing is required and the need to translate this into action. Target marketing and market segmentation, enables ccthere.com to focus their resources more precisely。Also deriving a greater competitive advantage and user satisfaction。

                                                    现在我再送你一段话:

                                                    Obviously the above is with marketing and business in mind, if you want perfect English, try pronouncing the above with a mouth full of marbles, if that is too easy, repeat the following:

                                                    Awound the Wugged Wock, the Wagged Wascal wan.

                                                    You might be able to correct my English, try correcting your manners instead!

                                                    Today’s market is characterised by intensive competition, choosing the right marketing strategy can affect the performance of ccthere.com.

                                                    上面两句是并列句,即两个主谓宾完整的句子,两句之间应该用period分开,而不能用逗号,如果一定要加逗号,第二句前面要加连词 “so 或者 and”.

                                                    Effective segmentation and target marketing is required and the need to translate this into action.

                                                    (what the hell is this behind “required”?)

                                                    改写:

                                                    Effective segmentation and target marketing is required, and it is necessary to translate this into action.

                                                    Target marketing and market segmentation, enables ccthere.com to focus their resources more precisely。

                                                    中间为什么要加逗号?Target marketing and market segmentation 不是后面全句的主语吗?这东东是单数还是复数?

                                                    Focus on 似乎更合适

                                                    为什么用their, 如果前面用单数,这里应该用its

                                                    Also deriving a greater competitive advantage and user satisfaction。

                                                    这不是一个整句,Fragment. My English prof. will give me a big F if he sees this.

                                                    现在我再送你一段话:

                                                    Obviously the above is with marketing and business in mind, if you want perfect English, try pronouncing the above with a mouth full of marbles, if that is too easy, repeat the following:

                                                    标点符号!!!!!

                                                    Awound the Wugged Wock, the Wagged Wascal wan.

                                                    这句话看不懂

                                                    You might be able to correct my English, try correcting your manners instead!

                                                    • 家园 Interesting

                                                      how all you can do is critise. I refuse to come down to your level, if you have nothing to say but offensive trouble making, try saying it somewhere else.

                                                      I will not waste my time on your version if what you think should win grammer of the week award, I am not in a school for an English competition.

                                                      All your post does show where you are really coming from and who you are.If you just like to be nasty, why not just go kick a baby or two, that would save me the trouble of being involved.

              • 家园 思炎和英国人交流时,他们挑你语法错误吗?

                我想不会挑吧?除非人家听不懂,目的是交流,不是上语法课。

                • 家园 没办法, 俺碰到“严肃认真”的中国英语教授了。。

                  这楼和俺的贴好象是讨论问题和交流为主,又不是什么“英语角”。。。

                  人家高人不看主要的讨论内容,爱挑语法错误,估计是职业病吧。。。俺们要理解。。。

                  • 家园 思炎妹妹还是年轻

                    何苦多说, 无用.

                    一笑而过吧

                  • 家园 我的英语很糟,但是日语更糟

                    人家问我对语言的理解,我是这样说的 --

                    中文,是一种语言。

                    英文,是一种工具。

                    日文,是一种行为艺术。

                    所以,英文的优点就是作为交流的工具,所以,才能够在世界风行。如果日语变成英语一样的国际语言,中国人大概还可以应付,估计有些民族会出现一些人疯掉的。

                    另外,提醒思炎一句话 -- 上网要花宝贵的时间,上网是来找快乐的,所以,我们通常只和朋友说话。

                    通宝推:老木,
                    • 家园 棒子文,是一种梦魇
                    • 家园 我完全同意萨大的对语言的观点和认知。萨大总是那么

                      谦虚和有修养。不光是写文章还是做人都是我学习的榜样。

                      所以,英文的优点就是作为交流的工具,所以,才能够在世界风行。如果日语变成英语一样的国际语言,中国人大概还可以应付,估计有些民族会出现一些人疯掉的

                      太可乐了,还真是这样。。。我18岁的时候曾学过日语,不过一到学语法的时候, 虽然没疯,但学不下去了。

                      另外,提醒思炎一句话 -- 上网要花宝贵的时间,上网是来找快乐的,所以,我们通常只和朋友说话。

                      嗯。。。记住了。 谢谢萨大

                  • 家园 听首歌吧

                    我很喜欢的一首now,we are free.

                    [MP=320,240]http://bbs.owecn.com/zrj/Honorfree.mp3[/MP]

                    • 家园 Enya

                      同好握手

                      不过我比较喜欢 only if那首

                    • 家园 Enya的,太好听了。。。我好象以前没听过,谢谢

                      一下子很震撼然后感到心灵的宁静。。。

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